Over the last couple of years, I have been forced to learn about the difference between the drive to create and the (apparent) expectations of potential readers. Writing is writing, and the doing of it is reward in itself. It’s just that you need a saw and hammer sometimes to fit it into the genre.
When I began writing my first novel about three years ago, it was my romantic notion that it should be an exercise in storytelling, a blending of oral tradition and whatever skill with the Mother Tongue I could muster. I had wispy ideas of a plot, to be sure, but I found myself larding the first draft generously with diversions about my own special interests: blues music and the southern gift of language and storytelling. (Living as I do now in Minnesota, I don’t hear as much euphony. We tend to keep it clipped. Maybe it’s the 25 below.) As a result, the first draft of Hack the Yak weighed in at 127,000 words. (Most novels of my genre are 80 – 100 thousand words).
I finally figured out that the story needed to move more quickly, took out some material that I love, and squeezed Hack the Yak down to 88,000 words. I hope that is closer to the publishing world’s perception of reader expectations.
I was just looking back at pictures and notes I took in March 2012 on the Blues Highway (Hwy 61 between Memphis and Vicksburg). I justified the trip as part of writing my first draft. As I worked through the novel, I had to cut most of the blues highway material, but it has provided a couple of short stories. My character Mase in The Cle eland Travel Inn is based on … well, really, abjectly copied from … Frank Ratliff, the proprietor of the Riverside Hotel in Clarksburg, MS. I attempted to capture Rat’s storytelling voice in a non-fiction piece, Bessie Smith’s Death.
A fine writing teacher and novelist, Steve Ulfelder, mentioned in a class that his third novel was the one that finally made it into the marketplace (check out Purgatory Chasm or his new one, Shotgun Lullaby at his website) but said a bit wryly that the good stuff in the first novels is creeping back into his later writings. An optimistic hope for me.